Hello. I want a feedback.

I would use AI to create combos for me and then I would see if the combo made sense. Throw away the stuff that didn't flow and keep the stuff that did.
Some of the stuff that doesn't flow is the best. Because by not flowing, it is not something your opponent would expect.
 
Some of the stuff that doesn't flow is the best. Because by not flowing, it is not something your opponent would expect.
But those combos may not make logic sense.

For example, "side kick, elbow strike" combo (exist in many Karate forms) does not make sense. After a side kick, your opponent will be too far away for your elbow strike.
 
Some of the stuff that doesn't flow is the best. Because by not flowing, it is not something your opponent would expect.
My experience is everything flows energy from the first strike flows into the second strike. What you stated would be a serious problem in circular systems. Even if timing seems irregular it still must flow.
 
But those combos may not make logic sense.

For example, "side kick, elbow strike" combo (exist in many Karate forms) does not make sense. After a side kick, your opponent will be too far away for your elbow strike.
I often see this in forms or kata that have been changed by people who didn't understand it. Combination CAB is created but in reality, if C hits the opponent, then A can never be an option.
 
I often see this in forms or kata that have been changed by people who didn't understand it. Combination CAB is created but in reality, if C hits the opponent, then A can never be an option.
The "right hook, left cross" does not make sense.

- Right hook makes your body to rotate to your left. Left cross makes your body to rotate to your right. It takes times to switch your body rotation directions. also
- when your opponent dodges under your right hook, he will be on your right-side door and your own right arm will jam your own left cross.

This is why more information will be needed to input into AI in order for AI to do the smart selection.
 
But those combos may not make logic sense.

For example, "side kick, elbow strike" combo (exist in many Karate forms) does not make sense. After a side kick, your opponent will be too far away for your elbow strike.
Unless your side kick misses.
 
And also, your opponent moves in. Kicking range is farther away than elbow striking range.
90% of the kick defenses in my TKD and HKD lessons involved moving in.

One of my favorite counters to the back kick is to follow my opponent in the direction of their spin and end up behind them.
 
For the OP- there is a difference between an academic and someone with experience. You're an academic. The best thing you can do join a school or club and start getting experience. It'll be a needed dose of reality and help you understand all this at the same time.
 
For the OP- there is a difference between an academic and someone with experience. You're an academic. The best thing you can do join a school or club and start getting experience. It'll be a needed dose of reality and help you understand all this at the same time.
TBH, it doesn't even sound like an academic understanding of martial arts. It sounds like an economist who learned their theory playing Monopoly instead of by getting an MBA.
 
TBH, it doesn't even sound like an academic understanding of martial arts. It sounds like an economist who learned their theory playing Monopoly instead of by getting an MBA.
I agree. But if it's someone genuinely interested, maybe young, I'd rather not have them get run off at what may be their first interactions with real martial artists. This person may join a school and end up being good. Never know. You're right in what you said above for sure though. The OP won't know without the experience......
 
The "right hook, left cross" does not make sense.

- Right hook makes your body to rotate to your left. Left cross makes your body to rotate to your right. It takes times to switch your body rotation directions. also
- when your opponent dodges under your right hook, he will be on your right-side door and your own right arm will jam your own left cross.

This is why more information will be needed to input into AI in order for AI to do the smart selection.
Hook -> cross is a common combo that makes sense. So, there is a lack of understanding (e.g., AI) of fighting, opponent reactions, action/reaction, etc., GIGO.

 
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So hello. I am designing a martial arts, just for self-defense and street fight situations. I don't have so much martial arts experience so i wanna share my martial arts and get a feedback. My martial art have forms, attacking (punching) styles and defending styles. I designed the martial art but i used AI to write conclusion about it. Please don't make fun of the name, i just made it up in my mind because i tought it was cool.

### Full Conclusion of Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist

#### Overview
Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist is a martial arts style that integrates principles of science and physics to maximize the effectiveness of its techniques. Each move is meticulously designed with a deep understanding of leverage, momentum, force, and human anatomy, focusing on delivering precise, powerful strikes and efficient defensive maneuvers. The style excels in exploiting vulnerabilities and incapacitating opponents swiftly, making it particularly effective for self-defense.

#### Normal Attacks
1. **Normal Punch:** Utilizes basic physics of force and momentum for straightforward, effective strikes.
2. **Open Hand Punch:** Strikes with the palm, targeting vulnerable spots to maximize impact.
3. **Chop:** Focuses force on a small area using the edge of the hand, targeting weak points like the neck.
4. **Half Opened Hand Punch:** Combines elements of a punch and finger strike to maximize damage to soft tissue areas and vulnerable facial points.
5. **Elbow Attack:** Uses the elbow as a strong, bony contact point for close-range counterattacks, utilizing leverage and compact power.

#### Defensive Techniques
1. **Deflecting:** Uses both arms to redirect the attacker’s energy, potentially stunning them and creating openings for counter-attacks.
2. **Blocking:** Absorbs and dissipates the force of an attack by connecting arms, reducing direct impact on any single point.

#### Special Techniques
1. **Consecutive Blows:** Rapidly uses every punching style in Akays Dragon Slayer Fist (except open hand style and elbow attack) to deliver a straightforward but powerful series of attacks.
2. **Open Hand Rib Attack:** Targets the opponent's ribs with the palm, cutting their breath and causing significant pain and injury.
3. **Rib Kick:** Delivers a powerful kick to the ribs when the opponent's hands are not free, useful in scenarios like being kidnapped. Requires calmness to perform effectively.
4. **Open Hand Jaw Attack:** Strikes the jaw horizontally with an open hand, causing significant damage.
5. **Head Grab:** Secures the opponent's head, allowing control and using momentum to throw or stun them.
6. **From Up To The Down:** Combines head control with a leg sweep to destabilize and bring the opponent to the ground.
7. **Two Limbs Grapple:** Grapples the opponent from behind and kicks their leg joint to make them fall easier. Requires calmness and an opening.

#### Ultimate Attack
- **Flowing Beatdown:** Emphasizes unpredictability and speed. The user moves quickly to get near the opponent, then delivers a series of rapid and unpredictable punches and kicks, forcing the opponent to move backward.

#### Ultimate State: Full Calmness
The user of the style must take a deep breath and focus on their goal or opponent. They must use the power of psychology over the brain to forget all pain and fatigue they are experiencing. This state uses the motto: "I don't feel pain. I don't feel fatigue. I am using this technique because I want to focus on my goal. The pain of the way is no more."

#### Scientific and Physical Principles
- **Leverage and Momentum:** Techniques are designed to maximize force and efficiency by leveraging the body’s natural mechanics.
- **Targeted Strikes:** Focuses on hitting specific anatomical weak points to incapacitate opponents quickly.
- **Redirection and Deflection:** Uses principles of momentum conservation and redirection to minimize impact and create openings for counter-attacks.

#### Self-Defense Application
Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist is highly effective in self-defense due to its precise targeting and efficient use of force. Techniques like the Rib Kick and Head Grab are particularly useful in situations where the defender is restrained or surprised by an attacker. The style's emphasis on scientific principles ensures that each move is not only powerful but also strategically sound, making it an excellent choice for real-world self-defense.

- **Scenario Example:** Imagine getting kidnapped. The kidnapper holds both your arms. You can perform a Rib Kick to stun the kidnapper, then follow up with Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist punch styles and kicks. Alternatively, you can use a Head Grab from Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist to toss the kidnapper's head to a nearby area, further incapacitating them.

#### Everyday Combat Versatility
While special forms and techniques are a significant part of Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist, the style also includes versatile and practical combat methods:
- **Punches and Blocking:** Regular punches and blocking techniques can be effectively used to defend against and subdue attackers.
- **Combining Techniques:** Practitioners can seamlessly integrate normal attacks and defensive techniques to handle various combat scenarios without always relying on special forms.
- **Practical Efficiency:** The scientific approach ensures that even the most basic techniques are performed with maximum efficiency and effectiveness, making everyday application straightforward and effective.

#### Unique Scientific Approach
Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist uses science unlike other martial art styles, which often rely solely on traditional punching and kicking techniques. This style emphasizes a deep understanding of physics and anatomy to enhance the effectiveness of each move.

### Physical and Mental Requirements
- **Physical Requirements:** This style requires good reaction speed and strength. Your leg and arm strength must be well-developed to perform the techniques effectively. Consistent training and physical conditioning are essential to master Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist.
- **Mental Calmness:** To perform these techniques effectively, the user needs to be mentally calm. Mental calmness allows for better execution and precision of techniques, especially in high-stress situations like self-defense.

### Conclusion
Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist is a highly specialized martial art that leverages scientific principles to deliver precise and powerful strikes. Its techniques are designed to exploit vulnerabilities and incapacitate opponents quickly, making it particularly effective for self-defense. The style's focus on precision, efficiency, and the practical application of everyday combat techniques makes it a formidable martial art. Whether relying on special forms or everyday punches and blocks, Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist provides a comprehensive and scientifically-informed approach to martial arts, ensuring both versatility and effectiveness in various combat scenarios. This style demands a short reaction time and overall strength. Mastering Akay's Dragon Slayer Fist and integrating its principles into normal styles offers a wide range of versatility. Mastering Akays Dragon Slayer Fist enhances scientific thinking and martial IQ, that way, it becomes even more versatile.


As a person who teaches martial arts, has written curriculum and or organized verbal curriculum, while also playing video games and lots of TT RPGS (Table top Role Playing Games), in my opinion this looks like another attempt a defining a Martial art for a TT RPG. It is coming from a specific point of view with limited understanding.

If your goal is for a TT RPG then fine.
If your goal is the backbone for a Video game with some back story then it could use some more story on how to get to these special moves

If your goal is your own actual martial art, you have a very long road in front of you to gain respect, and that will not come until you gain more knowledge.


Good luck in your goal
 
Oh, so NOW it makes sense that an opponent will dodge your technique...
If your 1st punch can knock your opponent down, you don't need to train any combos. Combo is trained when your 1st attack fails, and you try to get your opponent by your 2nd attack. So, your combo has to make logical sense.
 
If your 1st punch can knock your opponent down, you don't need to train any combos. Combo is trained when your 1st attack fails, and you try to get your opponent by your 2nd attack. So, your combo has to make logical sense.
So a side kick combo would not make sense if your opponent is at far range, because the combo would only make sense if your side kick missed.
But earlier it only made sense if your opponent was far because your side kick hit.

This is what I'm talking about.
 
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