Good morning David,
I appreciate the response.
In all honesty I did read your post, multiple times in fact.
No doubt. But in your restating of my statements, you clearly didn't read them carefully. The traditional school comment being one example. You made it plain that you were reading it differently than it was typed, although when you speculated on what I could mean, you made the same point that I was making.
And I honestly was just trying to give my opinion based on the points I saw you making. In your opinion I may not have grasped the nuance of what you were saying. So the overall premise I took from what you had quoted was that you felt there were indicators that made a McDojo,
Actually, I gave a composite of what people have said on this topic over the many years that it has been rehashed and some personal observations. I don't personally use the term outside of discussions on the topic. From a business standpoint, a school is either for profit or not for profit. It either has par or subpar instruction. The business model doesn't mitigate one or the other.
which I gave an alternating point of view that some of the things can have legitimate uses or not necessarily be red flags. The overall purpose being to show a point of view that perhaps contrasted your own and furthered the conversation. I did restate your comments because I agreed with some, and some I agreed with after some modification. I will be honest that I feel much the same way about your posts. You say that you are ok with an instructor making a profit but then you call the School owner who maintains the integrity of their art while making a profit a McDojo owner. In my defense I did state at the very beginning that all of this was my opinion and attempted to show where it differs. And at the end I again attempted to relay that it was my opinion and to explicitly state that I was not trying to attack or be argumentative as I know how easy it is to take things people say on forums like these.
I didn't take it as an attack. If I did, I would have said as much. But you demonstrate in the bolded comment above that you didn't read my post carefully. Because I didn't do that.
I can apologize for the length. I am talkative, sometimes go off on tangents, and can even be preachy at times (I was raised southern baptist, I'm trapped and don't know how to get rid of the preachiness
). It is my tendency to go off on tangents and be preachy that I try to write often that it is my opinion and that I am not meaning to seem like I am attacking or trying to offend anyone. I send my days talking to people and it has made me a bit chatty.
The bold was by accident. I did not bold it intentionally and am not sure how it got that way.
The length really wasn't an issue, but blog length posts don't fit quite as well into a discussion.
I guess my "brimming over with my rebuttal" was accurate as the post was meant to be a rebuttal but not really in a negative way. I am sorry if you took it that way.
What I mean by "brimming over with your rebuttal" is that you're so focussed on writing your rebuttal that you ended up rebutting points that were never made.
I use rhetorical questions, quite a bit both when I write and speak. Not intended to be snarky, cheeky maybe but not snarky. I would be willing to bet that most of the questions you felt were snarky were not meant to be snarky or probably even cheeky. I don't see a problem with using rhetorical questions. I use them to make or emphasize points, maybe too much but its how I am. Some of the non-rhetorical questions that you found snarky, well again I can only apologize for you finding them snarky but I assure you there was a valid (not necessarily one you agree with) point behind them. I'll try not to blog at you, though I am afraid it is another one of those personal quirks. I try to be thorough in my explanations, its a habit I have from teaching rather complex topics to people often straight out of high school. I am not saying that anything I said above was complex, just that I am used to explaining in depth. And I would rather write a hundred magazine articles or blog posts than a single scientific paper, I like the style of writing better.
I have no problem with rhetorical questions. It was the snark that I was refering to.
Maybe our definition of discussions are different. I responded to what you responded to me with. You gave me your point of view, I gave you and defended mine in return. You took offense either because of how I write or because you thought I was being snarky or because you felt I wasn't "getting" what you were saying, or because I gave my honest rebuttal rather than caving to your views and ended the conversation. If you had responded, I would have responded to you and by the time it was done I think we would have both clarified some misunderstandings and would have ended up with a decent approximation of what each person believes and quite possibly a better understanding of the opposing viewpoint. Real discussions take work and a willingness to do so on both sides even though they may not agree with what they're hearing/reading. I honestly wanted to better understand your point of view and the best way to do that was to confront it with my own and then see how you did so in return.
Okay, here are some of what I was refering to.
"There is a problem with a businessperson trying to be profitable?"
I neither said nor implied this. You're misrepresenting my statement.
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You are an expert on adult and child educational theory and application? "
For all you know, I may be. But rather than speculate on my area of expertise, respond to my statement. It will stand or no on its own merit. Attempting to discredit me in order to strengthen your response is unnecessary. In any case, none of what I posted qualify as deeply held beliefs. If you offer a compelling case to the contrary, I'm open to changing my perspective on the topic.
"Physical ability is not important in a physical activity?"
This, along with your follow up comments about PT in the military, show a lack of careful reading of my post. It isn't even close to what I said.
"So when you started off as a white belt your instructor taught you everything that was required all the way through the highest level in your system as a white belt, yes? "
The rest of your paragraph was a reasonable response to what I said, but this was unnecessary.
Perhaps they aren't meant to be snarky and probably arent, so apologies if I took them as such.
And I do not doubt that you are supportive of commercial schools, but as you noted I have not been here for any length of time and do not know how supportive you have been in the past. You speak from the sum of your experience, as do I even if we don't always know the sum of that experience. The last two sentences that you added in may have had me approach the whole thing a little differently had I seen them before I began writing my reply, though probably not. Each of the things you noted were on your list of McDojo common denominators. Now you may have meant that in and of themselves each one does not mean a McDojo, but it did read that way for me at least. And in my defense you gave no real quantifiable way to use this list to determine what mix of these traits denotes a McDojo and other statements as mentioned above show that profit is an important part of your definition regardless of quality (the whole McDojo Shool owner that makes a profit and "remembers why (s)he teaches"). I may be dense and not understanding the hidden meaning but the water is a little muddy.
Generally, I consider homogenization and over commericialization to be bad for any product, be it martial arts, food, or cars. If someone tells me that a school is a McDojo, but they teach an art that interest me and are conveniently located. I check out the school and if I like what I see, I may give it a whirl. If I don't, I won't. About the only thing that will chase me off right away are contracts and/or bank drafting. If I like what I see and can train without either of those, I'm willing to look deeper.
I don't personally use the term, "McDojo" outside of these discussions precisely because it isn't universally defined and because it is a pejorative. Also, some of the things that are associated with them are not actually bad things in and of themselves. So, if I visit a school and don't like what I see, I don't label it as a McDojo. I simply write it off as a bad fit for me and go elsewhere without disparging them on the web. My common denominator list includes the negatives that are often associated witht he term, not a red flag list for people to check off. Also, I find that many of the problems that people encounter in a martial arts studio are not apparent until you've been training there for some length of time. Thus, without training somewhere, I wouldn't presume to judge the quality of a school.
I partially agree with Steve; the business model is part of what goes into a McDojo. But the other part is the perception of subpar quality. McDonalds is a successful franchise, but the general perception of their food (particularly when the term 'McDojo' was coined) is that it tastes okay, comes with fun frills, and lacks actual nutritional value. So while the model may be part of it, it goes beyond just a business model.
If a school is a franchise or a commercial school, I prefer to look at them based on how well they do what they do rather than on their format.
I really don't know how to respond to the whole "if I'm here any length of time" as though I am supposed to turn and run from the board as fast as I can because you and I had a misunderstanding.
You don't really have to respond. People come, fire off a flurry of posts and then leave. Others come, fire off a flury of posts and then stay. Thus the comment, "if you're here for any length of time."
Based on your post, we probably agree on a lot regarding this subject, which is all that I was trying to communicate.
I have a thick skin but if misunderstandings are going to be all too common then it may be best for me to allow you the rule of your kingdom without my meddling.
Now this
is snarky.
I don't rule anything, be it here or anywhere else. This was completely unnecessary and quite frankly, rude.
With that being said I again apologize if you took offense to anything I said or thought I was trying to do anything more than have a conversation. I will admit that maybe I did not make myself clear on some things or how I meant things. I accept my part in the misunderstanding and hope that this little blog post
helped clear up where I was coming from or my intentions or just gave a little insight into the way I write/speak that can be taken the wrong way. I truly was, and still am, interested in understanding your point of view and do feel you have as much a right to yours as I do to mine.
No worries.
Again, I appreciate the response. I look forward to future conversations.
Daniel