Flying Crane
Sr. Grandmaster
Maybe. And it depends.Judging a kata by the style you train or have accomplishment in makes much sense. OTOH, I don't have to be an expert to present an informed opinion about the OP's kata illustration. Understanding kata conceptually, understanding traditional karate or traditional martial arts overall puts me in the position to express an evaluation having potential merit.
You can always have an opinion. It might not be worth much. Having experience with something else may not make your opinion worth much.