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Iron them flat and scent them…you need all the help you can get.But not so many the flow of the essay is interrupted. Use large denominations.
I find that using grammarly gets rid of a large wordcount whenever I have too much. Focuses on all the extra stuff and awkward phrasing, which is normally longer than using correct grammar.Great stuff! Editing down is usually straightforward: remove superfluous words such adjectives, tautologies and the really obscene swear words.
For the most part, I don't believe the premise either. The article seems to deal with the different "goals" of budo vs sport being compatible. Only one sentence is devoted to the differences in execution, and this is described as a qualified "moot" point dependent on not affecting the core of the art.Here’s one of mine that I wrote for a competition. I don’t even believe the premise, but for the purposes of the prize money (£50)
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Not really.For the most part, I don't believe the premise either. The article seems to deal with the different "goals" of budo vs sport being compatible. Only one sentence is devoted to the differences in execution, and this is described as a qualified "moot" point dependent on not affecting the core of the art.
The point is that this difference in goals will invariably affect the execution (and thus the effectiveness in the original martial intent) and find its way into the "grass root training." When a school's overriding focus is sport, this will be the natural result. After all, one trains in something the way one plans to use it.
Take iai as an example. Partner training with live blades can be a little dangerous, so wooden bokken were used. Later, the sport of kendo evolved with bokken being replaced with slats of split bamboo. While this sport develops a number of valuable skills, the method of execution greatly changed. The very essence of iai, cutting, is largely replaced with touching. Kendo is a different animal, an entirely different (though related) art from kenjustsu or iai.
In fact, your own sentence I quoted, proves this point. You wrote with winning the prize in mind (much like the goal in sport) and this compromised your execution of the essay to be something you don't even support. So, the goal of writing for "sport" is not complimentary to the goal (of most essays) of sincerely expressing your true thoughts, "budo".
IMO, it's fine to engage in sport MA or insincere commercial "sport" writing, as long as one realizes the difference between these and the ideal intent. So, this is not a criticism of the article, just a contribution to the "moot" point it brought up.
Wasn't a critique at all - nothing wrong with the article. I even agreed with your not buying the premise.Thank you for the unsolicited critique
I tried to avoid your getting any negative vibes from my post. Was not my intention. Just using it to expand on a related idea.this is not a criticism of the article, just a contribution to the "moot" point it brought up.
I don't think I made that argument at all.Not really.
It is dishonest to argue that sport doesn't train fighting because it is not fighting.
Regarding sport version of TMA - both these phrases are generally true. And IMO, sport fighting is fighting, but usually modified as it has been repurposed to some degree, including conforming to a rule set. I don't think anyone would deny this.develops a number of valuable skills, the method of execution greatly changed.
I spontanously draw the parallell between MA and sports, and science vs engineering. They are also related, yet have different goals and have differences in methodology or execution. The "tools" used in sports, originate from and was developed by MA. Just like in engineering.For the most part, I don't believe the premise either. The article seems to deal with the different "goals" of budo vs sport being compatible. Only one sentence is devoted to the differences in execution, and this is described as a qualified "moot" point dependent on not affecting the core of the art.
The point is that this difference in goals will invariably affect the execution (and thus the effectiveness in the original martial intent) and find its way into the "grass root training." When a school's overriding focus is sport, this will be the natural result. After all, one trains in something the way one plans to use it.
Dude! I really enjoyed the article. And even if you don't believe the premise, I thought you make very valid points. I feel they can coexist, and often when placed in a "sporting" context it can serve to uplift and inspire others.Here’s one of mine that I wrote for a competition. I don’t even believe the premise, but for the purposes of the prize money (£50)
Are Budo and Sports Complimentary? | Tozando
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A kata well done as you describe can certainly be worthy of appreciation. Since you positioned this in your response to the topic of sport, I think you are commenting that sport TMA, such as kata competition, can still have martial value and be inspiring. This brings up an issue (in my mind at least) of at what point does "pure" TMA cross over into being considered "sport." Is it just the fact that it's being done at a competition, or are there other factors involved?I remember watching a tournament, and a young lady performed her kata, and I was absolutely transfixed. I actually cried, not joking. It really really moved me. There was something deeper going on. It's not because it was technically perfect even though it was, there was such a infusion of intention, purpose, spirit and technique
Yeah I'm not really too sure @isshinryuronin . Whether there is a demarcation line I'm not too sure. I guess when all the training is geared towards competing with the aim of winning said competitions, that may be the line. But I don't really know of any clubs around that focus 100% solely on that. So it seems that the training itself and also the mindset and "why" would be that line. Whether it's as black and white or all-or-nothing I wouldn't think so.A kata well done as you describe can certainly be worthy of appreciation. Since you positioned this in your response to the topic of sport, I think you are commenting that sport TMA, such as kata competition, can still have martial value and be inspiring. This brings up an issue (in my mind at least) of at what point does "pure" TMA cross over into being considered "sport." Is it just the fact that it's being done at a competition, or are there other factors involved?
Wow! That is incredible and foolhardy too What if you’d pulled a muscle, ripped your rotator cuff or even broken a bone? No grading attempt for you! NASA used to forbid extreme activities amongst their Apollo astronauts just prior to a flight to prevent an aborted launch.Did something.... fun today.
I wanted to do a similar challenge to last year's grading prep (I climbed the nearby mountain to the highest peak with 10kg in my backpack). Today I attempted one of the other trails which circles all the way around the mountain... but running it whilst holding a 10kg dumbbell, no backpack this time. *bites nails*.
This walk is incredibly challenging as there are many steps, many inclines, declines, obstacles and even steep rockclimbing sections.
Well...... I did it.
I don't know HOW... the psychological requirements and demand to get through that were just beyond intense... All prior preparation (ankle, knee, hip, shoulder bulletproofing, and trail running) really helped keep good control, but I didn't prepare anything just prior to the run. No mantras, affirmations, meditation, getting in the zone, just went and did it.
I did actually run the majority of it surprisingly, it took 58 minutes total (with one stop to do training of a different sort).
A few things that occurred to me...
1) I treated the dumbbell as my friend, not an enemy, one that I had to get around the mountain, show it all the pretty views.
2) I had to be super honed in on my posture and structure, how I carried the dumbbell weight, in which the position changed MANY times throughout the journey, including over my head at some points, and had keep it really close to my centre the whole time. Carrying it was incredibly challenging, but eventually I just sort of forgot about it. The rockclimbing bits were fun
3) I was so doubtful within the first 2 minutes of even starting, realising this was gonna be far harder than I anticipated... Many demons came and visited along the way, greeting them as though old friends, and I welcomed them to come along for the run if they like . Had many moments where something just broke through, spontaneously a big smile came on my face, but I broke down and cried at the finish line.
Also with every massive boulder/rock I came across I placed the flat of my hand across it... letting it remind me of the strength, solidity and stability that rocks have, a good little reminder and transmission, thank you rocks, you rock
4) I stopped at the platform viewing area, and spontaneously decided to drop into shiko dachi stance whilst holding the weight above my head for 1 minute, followed by 100 punches in shiko dachi, before continuing the run.
Highly recommended, fun times!
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Nah, had done this trail many many times before, just an added element of challenge to get my endurance etc up. All part of my process. But no more of these types of sessions, that was my last huge run prior. The next two weeks will be much cruisierWow! That is incredible and foolhardy too What if you’d pulled a muscle, ripped your rotator cuff or even broken a bone? No grading attempt for you! NASA used to forbid extreme activities amongst their Apollo astronauts just prior to a flight to prevent an aborted launch.
Do your usual preparation, _Simon_, but until your grading, encase yourself in large cell bubble wrap, lie in a quiet, darkened room with whale calls playing in the background! When you pass, then you can do this sort of stuff!
Thanks mate, haha for sure. I actually derived this from one of my fellow Kyokushin training buddies, training for his Shodan he did this exact trail, but wearing a 20kg vest, AND carrying a 12kg boxing bag on his shoulders! But he was another level of beast haha. He inspired me and years later here we are hahaGyakuto probably have a good point but more power to you, that is Impressive! Why make it easy, when you can make it harder?
Sounds like you gained lots of mental strength! The next opponent facing you have to work and give you a harder time than a 1 hour dumbdell run to take you down
Do you have large quantities of cotton wool and bubble wrap?Nah, had done this trail many many times before, just an added element of challenge to get my endurance etc up. All part of my process. But no more of these types of sessions, that was my last huge run prior. The next two weeks will be much cruisier
I mostly agree with this sentiment. Sport requires the bastardization of TMA for safety, entertainment and scoring purposes. This can be (and is) carried to the point that sport ceases to be TMA, but a system unto itself. But there can be, IMO, exceptions to them being completely incompatible.My actual standpoint is I don’t feel TMA and sport are compatible.