Mark Lynn
Master Black Belt
Sorry I meant Do San instead of Dan Gun, my mistake.
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Good Evening everyone. Here is a clip of my senior student doing our four beginner forms. I would like any feedback possible so that I can become aware of things that I'm not catching to help her improve. Thank you so much for your time!
Yes. Acknowledging that it's really difficult to do releases in a one-person form, the idea is that you've attacked with a speahand, and they've grabbed your wrist. The obvious release is to move the hand in a circle, levering against the thumb. In the Palgwae 4 video, the body is also twisted and pulled back to aid in the release. This also sets the distance and starts the movement for the spinning back fist.
In his video, the spearhand is at 2:01. She brings the rear foot forward and twists the spearhand to a palm down position. The way I was taught Do San, this is almost correct. The major difference is that as you stpe forward, you're supposed to twist the hand and push the arm down to try and lever out of the grip. As I said, I find this to be an ineffective method of releasing a wrist grab, and in the context of the form, will result in your being far too close to use the spinning backfist.
The move is a spread block, although it's not normally done by reaching up and spreading on the way down. Imagine a person coming in for a two-handed grab at your throat or lapels. The more usual performance of the spread block would be for the hands to come together (or cross slightly), move upwards between the incoming hands and push outwards against the forearms. In Do San, you follow that up with a low/mid-level kick (a high kick would be silly, given the ranges involved).
Grabs/throws/takedowns/releases and such are really difficult to see/understand from one person forms. One of the things I try to do is pair students up and go through these things with a partner. You can see the lightbulbs going off, at times.
The difficulty here is that what I see as wrong, you may see as correct. But here goes...
It doesn't look like you're teaching the Chang Hon forms with sine wave. That's fine; I was originally taught them without sine wave, and I still prefer them without, in large part because I'm not convinced sine wave actually adds any benefit.
That being said, this young lady is moving up and down. A lot. If you're doing sine wave, fine. In that case, she's not moving enough. But if you're not, then her head should be staying at the same level, not bouncing up and down.
When she's advancing in front stance, her feet remain at shoulder width throughout the step, rather than moving through an arc.
In Dan Gun, when she's doing the twin forearm blocks, (the first is at 1:30) her lower hand never fully rotates palm out. It's near vertical.
In Do San, the way she's doing the release (following the spearhand) is absolutely useless. That form does have you moving forward into the release (more on that in a minute), but the arm needs to be pushed downwards as it is twisted to have any chance of actually breaking a grip.
In Palgwe 4 our GM Shin teaches the wrist break down at 1:41 as stepping forward and around a first attacker, striking back fist to a second attacker. The wrist break up at 2:05 is similar. I question the second break much more as you are unable to put much of any other body force into the break except the bicep.
Now, personally, I think stepping into the release make zero sense. If you actually try it as done in Do San, it'll generally fail to release the grip. And you will always be at the wrong range for the spinning backfist. It just won't work. To be effective, you need to slide the front foot back and turn the body as you twist the wrist. That will not only have a much better chance of breaking the grip, it'll also put you at the right distance for the spinning backfist to be used.
At 1:39 in this video, you can see the release done in the way I'm describing.
She's doing nice, solid forms overall. Her stances are solid and consistent, as are her techniques.
The two main styles of American Tae Kwon Do are Tiger Rock and the ATA, if you're looking for what the American version of TKD looks like.
If you want to be a better instructor then try to use those techniques in sparring until you are able to to each one in a free sparring situation. This will provide more insight into your system and it will help you become a better instructor, more than getting feedback from me and other's here.
From what I've seen of your own sparring, I would say that you are more than ready to take that journey. You can only go so far without trying to apply these techniques in free sparring. It doesn't have to be a requirement for your student's but it definitely should be a requirement for an instructor.
by the way keep up the good work.
Hello Azulx, I teach American TKD the same forms you do. Over all I think your student does a pretty good job but what rank is she? I couldn't tell if she is a 2nd dan, or a brown belt with two stripes or a dark purple with two stripes. Just wondering.
My views or critiques are mine only and I know that we do some things different, but you asked for feedback so here goes.
1) This is my first pet peeve when watching forms or even judging them in kata competition yet so often no ones does this. Before you turn around turn your head. Look we teach our kids to look both ways before crossing the street why wouldn't we teach our students to turn their head and identify where the attacker is, how they might be coming for the attack and so on. If kata represents what we are supposed to do in sparring or against and attack why would we have our students turn blindly into an attack when changing direction. So when teaching I first tell the students turn your head, chamber, turn and block. Your student never looks where she is going before she turns, instead she rotates her head as she turns. Just today when judging kata competition at a local tournament there was only one black belt competitor who I noticed without a doubt turning his head or shifting his gaze on every direction change. Most competitors executed the kata just like your student did. In Chulgi (Nahanchi/Tekki Nidan) I believe the opening move is looking both ways before you begin.
2) I too thought her stance looked a little wide but not extremely excessive. The next few videos featuring the ATA instructors all had just as wide stances. Does this make it right? That depends upon you and your belief as to why the stance should be wide or narrow. Since you are an independent you can make the change to how you see fit, not because some organization says this is how it is done. After reading everyone comments here, several believe it should be wide some believe it should be narrow. I teach about a shoulder width apart like several of the posters said. By having the stance to wide it is technically weaker, the groin is open to attack, etc. etc. again you have ability to change it or not. I do recommend you give it a lot of thought as to should you change it or not. What's the pros and cons of each type of stance.
3) I believe her back stance front leg is almost to straight, potentially setting it up for an attack. Now it is not as bad as I saw on a black belt exam once, there the student had been told to lean his weight back on the rear foot and lock his front knee out (making the leg straight) those of us on the exam board not from the school were kind of horrified and we all had the same concern that it was vulnerable to being attacked by a front kick, or set up for a lock knee take down etc. etc. but that was how the instructor was taught and how it was passed down to the student. Even at the tournament again today I saw the same stance from the American karate TKD schools, yet the more traditional (I.e. Shotkan, Isshinryu, Gojuryu, and other American karate schools) had a deeper stance with both knees bent.
4) In the last form Dan Gun I agree that the turn after the spear hand is problematic, I teach it similar to how Dirty Dog describes it except I teach a different application off of a hand grab (as in shaking hands) instead of the wrist grab. I teach a similar movement as in the video he posted only I step into a horse stance with a hammer fist hit that is the same as the final two back hand chops. By doing that if I'm to close like Dirty Dog says you will be (which you are) I can hit with a elbow strike prior to extending my arm. Like I said being an independent allows me the freedom to alter the kata to fit my teachings.
5) In regards to her transitions I too think she raises upwards to much. If you were teaching the sine wave then that might be OK. I teach it more in lines with the view of trying to keep your head level as you move from one technique/stance to the next. For instance at the end of Dan Gun she does the backhand chop and then raises upwards and lowers downward to chop. Why? What purpose does it serve? What application? These are questions to ask as to why raise up and down. From my understanding the head was kept level (based on Japanese karate from which the forms came from) until the sine wave was introduced in the late 70's early 80's and then it changed. Perhaps the adaptation of the up down movement is not the sine wave (with all of its back ground instruction) but rather a more modern adaptation influenced by the sine wave motion as taught by more modern instructors who see the sine wave and copy it without really understanding it. Just speculation on my part. But I see this all of the time, even today at the tournament, and when I ask about it there isn't a good reason for it. People usually say it's just how I was taught.
6) The stepping motion is your personal preference. I tend to teach the railroad track stepping motion to my beginners and the C step or arcing motion in the step to intermediate belts. Along with applications for the step.
I hope this helps. However over all she looked pretty good and I think you will make some good students.
There's no reason not to do grappling, throws, or knees during sparring. Eye gouges are trickier. There are ways to simulate them in sparring, but you need training partners you can really trust for safety so I usually don't bother.So the grappling, throws, eye gouges, knees etc. etc. were removed for sparring but still remained in kata. Seeing that Gen Choi and others took Japanese kata and rearranged them to create new Korean forms those techniques and applications still remain (although now more mixed up). So to say you need to do these techniques in a free sparring situation I think is wrong. Controlled self defense drills yes but free sparring I disagree.
The only way I've found to do any sort of eye attacks safely in sparring is with face shields (on sparring helmets) or well-fitted goggles. Enough effort that I rarely bother - more for a change of pace than anything else.There's no reason not to do grappling, throws, or knees during sparring. Eye gouges are trickier. There are ways to simulate them in sparring, but you need training partners you can really trust for safety so I usually don't bother.
There's no reason not to do grappling, throws, or knees during sparring. Eye gouges are trickier. There are ways to simulate them in sparring, but you need training partners you can really trust for safety so I usually don't bother.
3 Stooges eye poke defenseThe only way I've found to do any sort of eye attacks safely in sparring is with face shields (on sparring helmets) or well-fitted goggles. Enough effort that I rarely bother - more for a change of pace than anything else.