The Marine

Andy Moynihan

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The sun beat like a hammer, not a cloud was in the sky.

The mid-day air ran thick with dust, my throat was parched and dry.

With microphone clutched tight in hand and cameraman in tow,

I ducked beneath a fallen roof, surprised to hear "Stay low."



My eyes blinked several times before in shadow I could see,

The figure stretched across the rubble, several steps away from me.

He wore a cloak of burlap strips, all shades of gray and brown,

That hung in tatters till he seemed to melt into the ground.



He never turned his head or took his eye from off the scope,

But pointed through the broken wall and down the rocky slope.

"About eight hundred yards," he said, his whispered words concise,

Beneath the baggy jacket he is wearing a device.



A chill ran up my spine despite the swelter of the heat,

"You think he's going to set if off along the crowded street?"

The sniper gave a weary sigh and said "I wouldn't doubt it,

Unless there's something this old gun and I can do about it."



A thunder clap, a tongue of flame, the still abruptly shattered:

While citizens that walked the street were just as quickly scattered.

Till only one remained, a body crumpled on the ground,

The threat to oh so many ended by a single round.



And yet the sniper had no cheer, no hint of any gloat,

Instead he took a logbook out and quietly he wrote.

"Hey I could put you on TV, that shot was quite a story!"

But he surprised me once again- "I got no wish for glory."



"Are you for real?" I asked in awe, "You don't want fame or credit?"

He looked at me with saddened eyes and said "You just don't get it.

"You see that shot-up length of wall, the one without a door?

Before a mortar hit it, it was a grocery store."



"But don't go thinking that to Bomb a store is all that cruel,

The rubble just across the street -it used to be a school.

The little kids played soccer in the field out by the road,"

His head hung low, they never ever thought a car would just explode.



" As bad as all this is though, it could be a whole lot worse,"

He swallowed hard, the words came from his mouth just like a curse.

"Today the fights on foreign land, on streets that aren't my own,"

"I'm here today 'cause if I fail , the next fights back at home."



"And I won't let my Safeway burn, my neighbors dead inside,

Don't want to get a call from school that says my daughter died;

I pray that not a one of them will know the things I see,

Nor have the work of terrorists etched in their memory."



"So you can keep your trophies and your fleeting bit of fame,

I don't care if I make the news, or if they speak my name."

He glanced toward the camera and his brow began to knot,

"If you're looking for a story, why not give this one a shot."



"Just tell the truth of what you see, without the slant or spin:

That most of us are OK and we're coming home again.

And why not tell our folks back home about the good we've done,

How when they see Americans, the kids come at a run."



You tell 'em what it means to folks here just to speak their mind,

Without the fear that that tyranny is just a step behind:

Describe the desert miles they walk in their first chance to vote,

Or ask a soldier if he's proud, I'm sure you'll get a quote."



He turned and slid the rifle in a drag bag thickly padded ,

Then looked again with eyes of steel as quietly he added:

"And maybe just remind the few, if ill of us they speak,

That we are all that stands between the monsters and the weak.



by Michael Marks - a Marine 2006
 
WOW. That was truly powerful - thank you.

And to all who have served our country, my undying gratitude. :asian:
 
Bravo!
 

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That is great, I remember in boot camp they made us remember "The Green Monster From the Sea." I have got to find that.
 
I don't know what to say that won't sound trite or glib.

Poetry is at it's best when it shies away from cunning linguistic devices and cuts to the core of an emotion. That's what that piece did.

I specialised in war poety for my English Literature 'A' Level and that had the same effect on me, in a modern setting, as something like Dulce et Decorum Est (World War One) did back in my late 'teens.

I hope that the 'truths' in it surpass the media/propoganda we get fed that only emphasises the political message of the governments involved rather than the reactions of the people that are actually there.
 
Michael Marks- I salute you. It is/was a job to do to insure that bit of luxury- freedom - that many take for granted. Just a job- not for glory, but for our families, friends, and those who we hold dear.
 
That's just awesome. Salute to all our troops, past and present. :asian:
 
I don't know what to say that won't sound trite or glib.

Poetry is at it's best when it shies away from cunning linguistic devices and cuts to the core of an emotion. That's what that piece did.

I specialised in war poety for my English Literature 'A' Level and that had the same effect on me, in a modern setting, as something like Dulce et Decorum Est (World War One) did back in my late 'teens.

I hope that the 'truths' in it surpass the media/propoganda we get fed that only emphasises the political message of the governments involved rather than the reactions of the people that are actually there.



Wow, well......whenever you go overseas and have to shoot people to save your skin. Therefore it is you, you rifle, ammo and team then there is no such thing as propaganda.

Sorry, no offense but it is only propaganda if you have never done it.

Just my opinion. I have always wandered why I had to apologize for the comments of civilians and never the ones made by those in uniform or their loved ones.

I am not trying to rub the wrong way, but man until you get shot out of the sky in a CH-46 from 1500 ft up, pilots dead.....the rest of the crew says "What do we do, so and so has this and that broke? Yeah, Sarge what do we do? And oh by the way you are in Liberia Africa and here come the bad guys. Well, take it for what it's worth....that is just one story.

Frmr. Sgt. Matt Morton USMC - Medically discharged.
 
Hi matt.m

As the farthest thing from my mind was to upset an ex-serviceman, I'm hoping that you simply misinterpreted what I posted above.

I was speaking in support of the man-on-the-ground and saying that the piece in post one made it's point very well, both in its message and it's language.

I was contrasting the 'truth' embedded in the poem with the falsity of the media coverage of the conflict and how that has not changed since Owen's time (when his poems caused quite a political storm as they contrasted with the image the papers of the day were depicting the war).
 
Hi matt.m

As the farthest thing from my mind was to upset an ex-serviceman, I'm hoping that you simply misinterpreted what I posted above.

I was speaking in support of the man-on-the-ground and saying that the piece in post one made it's point very well, both in its message and it's language.

I was contrasting the 'truth' embedded in the poem with the falsity of the media coverage of the conflict and how that has not changed since Owen's time (when his poems caused quite a political storm as they contrasted with the image the papers of the day were depicting the war).


My friend there is certainly no harm done. I understood the meaning of the topic. I mean let's be realistic, if Jesse James actually robbed everyone who blamed him or Billy the Kid really killed as many as reported then they would never sleep.
 
OOOOOORAAAAAAAH! Semper Fi!

Gotta love the Marines, they stole rope from the Army, an anchor from the Navy and eagle from the Air Force. They have their own infantry, their own armor and air and lets not forget the ships. They understand "close air support" and everyone from the top down knows the mission. Not for glory but for "love of country." Marines know how to keep secrets.

God bless Chesty. God bless the Marines.
 
"Some people live an entire lifetime wondering if they have made a difference in the world. Marines don't have that problem."
- Ronald Reagan
 
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