Did you see this bit ...
Willard Romney said:
The attack on faith and religion is no less relentless. And tolerance for pornography--even celebration of it--and sexual promiscuity, combined with the twisted incentives of government welfare programs have led to today's grim realities: 68% of African American children are born out-of-wedlock, 45% of Hispanic children, and 25% of White children. How much harder it is for these children to succeed in school--and in life. A nation built on the principles of the founding fathers cannot long stand when its children are raised without fathers in the home.
Now, when I learned the craft of the English language, a "paragraph" was held together by an idea presented, usually, in the first sentence.
Here, the governor is apparently going to talk about the 'relentless' 'attack on faith and religion'.
Questions - attack by whom? demonstred how? evidenced by what?
Nope, he talks nothing of faith in this paragraph. He talks nothing of religion in this paragraph.
Instead, after his thesis sentence, he flip flops into pornography. I don't remember the commandment, thou shalt not watch movies of people screwing. He calls pornography in our society as celebrated. Occassionally, I hear of a gay pride parade. But, I don't recall ever seeing a 'I screwed my neighbor's wife' parade. Seems to me, that today, especially with satellite TV, pornography is still a pretty private thing.
Maybe, Mr. Romney was railing against the Marriott and Hilton corporations. After all, they are the largest perveyors of pornography in the country.
But, then, he flip flops again. He is not talking about pornography, nor about faith or religion. Now he is talking about government welfare programs that cause out of wedlock childbirths. (all in two sentences ~ amazing ~ what
is he talking about).
I can't help but wonder, what welfare program is he talking about? Put a name and a program on it. My best guess is abstinence only education. That is the most certain government program to lead to out of wedlock childbirth. Recent records show that out of wedlock births show a marked increase in recent years (9 to 12 % higher in 2005 as compared to 2002).
Notice how he attacks first 'African American', second 'Hispanic', only lastly coming to 'White' children. Although, when looking at actual people, as opposed to the subtle racism on display here, the actual number of people born out of wedlock by Whites is greater than African Americans, or Hispanics.
non-hispanic white out of wedlock births = 577,617
non-hispanic black out of wedlock births = 407,756
hispanic white out of wedlock births = 437,209
hispanic black out of wedlock births = 28595
(2005 data from the CDC)
He closes the paragraph with a 'we are the world' type of nicety that everyone would agree with, although Bill Cosby gets attacked for stating. It makes one wonder.
Whomever it was that put together the Governor's speech, he or she certainly knows which code words to throw in to appease the conservative ilk of Rush Limbaugh, Ann Coulter, and Shawn Hannity. But I think the speechwriter, perhaps earned a "C" in English Comp.