I like the first three a lot! Nice combination of model and photographer. The last one is a bit too posed for me. In #1 the half-open and untucked shirt sends an alluring signal without being in any way prurient. Is there a make-up or lighting issue under her left eye in #2 and both eyes in #3? I find it a bit distracting.
I like them alot. The first one I wish her pants were a lighter color they kinda disapear into the back drop. The last one was too I'm swooning posy for me.
I liked them all as well... and have to agree with the *ah swoon* pose on the forth one... but it still WORKED... perhaps if she were a bit more relax and given the idea that she is resting with her hand on her head by twisting the wrist a few degrees so it lays flat on her forehead... jes an idea.
She could go to a make-over place at a mall anchor store where professional artists work and could help her find the right color blends for her skin, etc. ... also :idunno: it might be free if she's pretending to make a big sale and then ends up buying one or two pieces ... ok, ok it's a mean trick but hey you do what ya gotta do.
But if you can find a pro who will work for cheep then that'll be even better... make an appointment prior to the shoot then that part of it is a no worry.
You're getting better Bob with each new thread. No doubt about that.
Nice shots and a nice looking model too. I think my favorite is the first one it kind of gives you a tease of whats under her shirt without actually showing you. Don't care much for the facial expression of the 2nd one.