TrueJim
Master Black Belt
When I look at the taekwondo pages on Wikipedia, I see a number of errors that to me seem like easy fixes. I was thinking at taking a crack at fixing them, but I wanted to run these thoughts by some other martial artists first. I've checked the Talk pages on these wiki articles, but none of the recent online chatter is from martial artists.
Let's start at the top: the opening paragraphs of the main article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taekwondo
There are lots of other cleanups that can be done, but those are probably less controversial. Before I perform any controversial cleanups, I wanted to run those questions by some martial artists.
Let's start at the top: the opening paragraphs of the main article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taekwondo
- In paragraph 4, ITF taekwondo is referred to as Sport Taekwondo. Would you guys consider ITF to be Sport Taekwondo? I wouldn't have thought so.
- In paragraph 3, it says Traditional Taekwondo patterns are named after Korean historical figures. I think they mean ITF patterns are named after Korean historical figures. Agree?
- Then down below, in the section called Organizations. It seems to me some clarity could be added there. I'd be inclined to rewrite that more like a list: 3 ITFs, a GTF, a WTF, an ATA, Jhoon Rhee, and then more niche organizations. Any thoughts on how to clean that section up?
There are lots of other cleanups that can be done, but those are probably less controversial. Before I perform any controversial cleanups, I wanted to run those questions by some martial artists.